Hello Shining,

I love reading your post this week. I think you did a good job in describing The things you learned in this course. Also, I think it is noticeable that your multimedia skills has improved a lot. Furthermore, I think you did a great job in editing your movie and describing the work you have done. The background sound you chose is also reflects your feelings very well. The only suggestion I have about your edited video is that you could consider add some transitions between each video clips. Overall, I think your edited video is very good and I would appreciate to read your new posts in the future.

Sincerely,

Ruoxi